Creative Writing Competition Year 9 winner
CHAPTER 1
The rain pattered on the reinforced roof, dripping down the toughened glass skylights. Joe was depressed. He was always depressed after ‘The Incident’. The humid air, thick in his lungs made him long for fresh air, wind on his face, but not any more. Not after what happened.
The most powerful science company, WeatherTech® tried to experiment to see if they could control the water cycle. Using thousands of dollars’ worth of technology and chemicals upon chemicals, they thought they had finally cracked it, but things went wrong… After they had placed the chemicals in earths water sources, scientists observed the PH of the water decrease. At first it wasn’t so bad but then it got worse, the PH went below 1. Water is not highly acidic. It was all over the news, the papers, the radio. It wasn’t long before people knew they had to do something.
It cost Trillions but they finally managed it. All of earth’s population now live below the surface. Things were bad but it’s amazing what the human race will do to survive. Things had changed, birds were a thing of the past. A few species had been saved and let free to traverse the vast caves that humans now lived in. Joe missed the surface, the sun, the snow.
He peered out of the grimy HydroTough® window. Outside, 50m2 spotlights dominated the roof of the cavern, trying to recreate the daylight of the surface. Shops bustled with people, clamouring for goods.
Joe wasn’t very well off. He was a 15 year old orphan, short on cash and home comforts. If he saved enough he might be able to move deeper. The poor always got the highest homes. 3cm of roof was exposed to the constant rain above. The rain which might have been responsible for the death of his parents, but he could never be sure. He sat back on his standard issue bed. In the slums, you were given a bed, a bathroom and a roof to live under. If you moved into the cities you were on your own. No landlord and no standard issue beds (they were nicknamed ‘back-scratchers for a reason) but for now he was just a kid In a world that had changed. He needed to find out more about what happened to his parents but first he needed a map of the new civilisation, it was only fifteen days since he moved underground so he hadn’t had much time to settle in, he needed to see an old friend…
Joe strolled to the hydrogel® door and shoved. It moved about five inches, he rammed harder and the door burst open onto a walkway. Joe sprinted along and down a flight of stairs. He kept running, he took a sharp left at a restaurant and rounded on a five story car park. He found what he calls ‘the bucket of bolts’ clicked it open and climbed in. He swerved around a large bin lorry whose rather fat occupants recoiled in shock. Joe didn’t slow down though and plummeted through the alleys until he came out on the main street.
It was an impressive sight. Large towering buildings dominated the length of the road, restaurants, clubs, houses and offices sprawled as far as the eye can see. This was immense because it had only been built four months ago (the government had suspected something may go wrong and started to prepare before the incident happened). People strolled along the pavements, oblivious to the acidic carnage being battled 50m above them.
Joe flew down the fast lane and over a crossing, scaring an man so much he fell back onto a flowerpot in fright! Joe kept on driving and didn’t slow down.
CHAPTER 2
Since the incident, many new things had challenged the human race in the fortnight they had spent underground. We had drilled deeper than we had when we lived on the surface. New creatures had been discovered, some of them dangerous. Also, rumour has it that a new disease had appeared, details of which were classified by the NCR (New Core Reinforcements, the military). We were coping though, we had to. Joe pulled up at the building, it was fairly new looking (although everything was underground) he got out and slammed the door.
Joe knocked three times and waited. A huge round man of about 30 opened the door, tried to say something but burst into a coughing fit. Joe backed away a few feet and said “err, you okay George”? The coughing finished and George spoke in a deep, husky tone. “Yeah, what you doing around here Joe”? Slurred George. “I’ve got some business regarding my parents, could I use your network please.” Said Joe in a tone you couldn’t refuse. “Erm…yeah, I suppose you could.” George said uneasily, his piggy eyes darting back and forth. Joe stepped inside, the putrid stench hit him like a punch to the face. Joe staggered a bit but carried on down a corridor. George shambled after him. They finally reached a small room, Joe walked in, followed by George, who crammed himself through the door. In front of them was a 70’’ Neutron screen with a top of the range holographic display. Joe sat in a nearby armchair, grabbed the keyboard and got the name search engine. George was a friend of Joe’s dad and had a lot of illegal stuff, also he was a praised hacker and the website Joe was on was meant to be ‘secure’ government files, but for George, it was nothing. Joe punched in his parents’ names and started the long wait for it to load.
“So…err, what have you been doing lately”? Mumbled George.
“Not much, you”? Replied Joe.
“Playing a bit of tennis, football and doing a bit of jogging”! Said George happily.
“That’s great George, or is that just your way of saying: Video games, eating pizza and watching TV”? Said Joe in an icy tone.
“Well… I did watch tennis once…” muttered George under his breath.
“You haven’t changed a bit you useless pile of fat!” laughed Joe, smiling for the first time in days, satisfied at the aggravated expression forming on Georges pudgy face.
The website beeped and loaded. Two silhouetted images came up with the faces blurred out. They had the letters: NLDS next to them. “What the…” said Joe in a voice that could cut through metal. “I’m sorry”. Said George. “Why”? Asked Joe “I’m going to-” Joes sentence was cut short and everything went black. George winced as a baton, wielded by a NCR member, expertly hit Joe in the back of the neck. “I regret it now”. Sighed George. “Too late” growled the NCR member before heaving Joes limp body onto his shoulder and walking out the door…
©Alex Bowell